Saturday, 10 August 2013

fire???

FIRE  
Fire is like waves of lightning while it glows like the moon.
It burns through my skin with evilness as I scream to death.???                      
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3 comments:

  1. Cheryl Hartnell18 September 2013 at 19:47

    Robert, this is a very powerful description of the fire. I like the way you compared it to the moon.

    Have you considered adding extra lines, before the last one. Maybe you could mention the sound and smell of fire?

    Mrs Hartnell

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  2. Cheryl Hartnell18 September 2013 at 19:48

    Robert, this is a very powerful description of the fire. I like the way you compared it to the moon.

    Have you considered adding extra lines, before the last one. Maybe you could mention the sound and smell of fire?

    Mrs Hartnell

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  3. Anonymous20 August 2025 at 11:57

    Is this writing fire????

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